 "You may not control all the events that happen to you, but you can decide not to be reduced by them." 
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Vicki
9/20/2013 11:55:10 pm
Dear Maria, I love the thought you put into these deceptively simple poems. It is only possible for someone who has truly experienced these emotions to write like this. I am so glad it is cathartic for you, and encouraging for us as we reach a new understanding. What is really clever about this is how open it is to individual interpretation, according to the experiences of the reader! Beautiful work dear Mar.
Kimmie
9/21/2013 01:50:21 am
Through our trials we do learn to find peace at the other end in time. This is a wonderful poem of hope Maria. Thank you. 9/21/2013 02:47:23 am
Finding peace in the body's loss of control..... certainly not easy, but possible. Like all your poems, Mar, this one, too, is loaded with wisdom. An encouraging, poetic statement!
Bill
9/21/2013 04:36:12 am
My favorite kind of poetry....minimum words and maximum meaning....beautiful, Maria!
Mike
9/23/2013 09:21:08 am
I find this piece to be very powerful. A unique image is created. Like watching butterflies in a hurricane.
You inspire me with your short yet stirring words, no matter the length of a piece, it's how it captures and enters your soul, your words have always done this for me and you my dear have found strength in her words. " Finds peace in loss of control " Beautiful Mar! I love your poetry. I wonder why i was not notified when you wrote this? I just happened upon it from your email this morning. BTW, your encouragement to your student was so great. I loved reading about your journey through nursing, your fears, your victories, your account of being shot six times was chilling. God had a purpose for you dear one. Love you..I'm clicking notify me of new comments to this post by email. I might have missed doing that. lol
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After publishing my second poem, Betrayal, a good friend emailed me to see if she could help! I hastened to explain that my poetry is a cathartic release of universal emotions and feelings.
In my first series, An Alphabet of Affirmations, I developed a positive mantra for healing, from Awe to Zeal, and as I build this collection of poems, I plan to explore those sorrowful and challenging feelings we experience along life's journey.
My goal in this second series is to promote hope, peace and encouragement in all who read. Thank you for taking the time to visit and share.
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